A.O. Avalon

[pre] Mona was pinning up her hair this morning and counting every minute of seven years She looked in the mirror and saw a face Which didn't look like it ...

Incan, you do have a way with words. I very much enjoy the way you've strung these words together, especially in the last stanza ("moving and unmoving"). However, it's all ...

I echo Gal on her comment about American society, which you have to admit is at least some what true. Furthermore, I don't think that writing must be obscenity free ...

Quick little history lesson... The "Romantic" period in history is defined as being a time when art was meant to spark the imagination, and appeal to the senses. So I ...

M'dear, this isn't so much a poem as it is a soliloquy. Or perhaps a monolouge sinced it is addressed to a second party? Either way, there's nothing wrong with ...

Why is it a "callous" sacrifice? It doesn't seem to fit with the theme of your poem. Is callous actually the word you wanted? If it is, then you need ...

I'm not really digging my title, any suggestions?

Well while the "haha your hair's aflame" line was a bit childish but altogether very amusing. Sounds British-rocker-esque, which makes sense... I agree, I like songs that get their point ...

For the most part, the Catholic church and I stay out of each other's way, but I've always loved the Virgin Mary and her story... so here's my tribute. ------------------------------------------------

I don't disagree that the young lady was acting exceptionally foolish, and had she acted with more maturity she'd probably still be alive. But we'll shy away from questioning fate. ...

Says the girl who has a pseudo-relationship. Soulmate, will you marry me in Vermont??!!!!

I have to agree with Gala, In. If keep pulling out the ten dollar words, you'll soon be bankrupt. I think everyone on the sight respects how intelligent you are, ...

[pre]On the 13 year old girl: No, I don't believe anyone "asks for it" when it comes to rape and murder. I've found that most 13 year old girls would much ...

Here's what I don't get... women who fear the "homosexual threat". Ladies, you have alot more to fear from heterosexual males. Who's more likely to rape and murder you? Survey ...

The "guest" message is actually me, i just wasn't logged in and was being confused by the new layout. so yeah.